Looking back at my post, I think I wasn't nearly clear enough, my bad. The first few were the "original character". 1st - I thought she'd have super strenght or something, 2nd & 3rd - getting her a bat, maybe put her in a brawl. Only after drawing these did I want to redesign. The last one will be the illustration I'm going with, though I'll be changing the characters look on the fly. But, yeah, previous ones did show some promise.
Edit: @mr_dessin
not sure if I need to add the "@", will do anyway