D is my favorite

I think C has a lot of potential, try looking up Tier Harribel from Bleach, preferably the manga version for inspiration. I think Tite Kubo excels in this type of designs

i finally decided the D becouse i can make the character corrupted by her sword

That's really intriguing beginning :wink: I would vote for D too.

Hi!
A from your previous batch! A because her shoulder pad goes well, in term of shapes with the reste of the body, also it match your "corrupted" designs.
For the new batch, how comes you didn't remove the price tag from her hat? With white hairs the corruption marks stand out more, with dark hair the overall appearence is stronger. Up to you.
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My tip for you would be to try to push the sillouett of her. You have all of these interesting asian-inspired elements, right? And I thin if you moved them out from her body more, it could really make her look coolel.
Like, exaggerate out the shoulder rope more, make the back knot protrude more and a bit bigger.
You haven't started to add anything the the feet yet, but I definately think you could add some cool protrusions over there as well to make the sillouett even cooler. :smile: Just edges and bulges and curves just to make the sillouett stand out. ^^
Hope that helps. :smile:

Thaks man i will try to keep that in mind, thats an early concept so probably will change a bit, btw i dont want to make she too big so thats why i dont exaggerate too much nothing, but i will test your advice, thanks again :smile:

Sorry, but ¿ where are your social networks?

very nice, makes me miss the dark side. your doing a great job keep it up.

Sorry im new in that forum and i dont know how to use it well xD
My twitter is: @lugger2
i will try to update that now xD