Hi Matt, thanks for the feedback!
Scott Robertson's videos and book on perspective are really useful and are very technical and they helped a lot in addition to the assignment.
I see what you mean with the proportions, the ankles look very narrow and the male hips too wide. Looking back at the proportions from the training video looks like the hips line up close to the arm pits (mine line up way past that). I also notice the bulge of the outer arms are in the wrong place as well.
Cheers, gestures are fun so Ill give some exaggerated poses a go!
Had another crack at the proportions and bar putting some hench legs on the male it lined up better. Maybe living near the peak district has distorted normal looking legs for me as everywhere you walk is up hill. haha