FINAL | WORLDS | 2D | divine battle ´s debris | Wlfrano G

fanowll 2017-06-21 19:10:46 UTC #1

Hi ! i hope my idea have a nice look
Name: Wlfrano G.
Email:Wlfrano18@hotmail.com

fanowll 2017-06-21 19:13:11 UTC #2

Name: Wlfrano G.
Email:Wlfrano18@hotmail.com

fanowll 2017-06-23 21:36:24 UTC #3

first sketch!!

gamma1661 2017-06-23 21:49:53 UTC #4

Looks interesting.

fanowll 2017-06-24 01:31:25 UTC #5

fanowll 2017-06-24 21:57:00 UTC #6

What do u think?

fanowll 2017-06-26 02:35:22 UTC #7

what do u recomend me to clear ?(its not the final)

rybusandrzej 2017-06-26 08:45:12 UTC #8

I would recommend to focus more on buildings and infrastructure than on that angel she's an nice idea but shouldn't be main point of interest.

jonatan-moonchild 2017-06-26 09:29:52 UTC #9

Heya. Interesting idea you have here .

If I would add my two cents... That wing splits image almost in half. Symmetrical composition is of course a matter of preferences but if you would like to break it a little, you could move it a bit to the left (let's say) and slant it slightly to enhance the effect. To balance the composition you cold stick on the opposite side of further plan some giant sword (let's say) slanted the opposite direction.

The other thing... I'm far from hating nudity but... I'm not sure if visible nipples will be at acceptable level of nudity for this challenge. But of course the final word belongs to the Judges so...
Just a thought, but maybe you could make her stony? You know - like after death in epic battle her body turned into stone. That could help to "keep gore and nudity to a SFW (safe for work) level" (quote from the Brief).

Of course it's all just my humble thoughts. If you see it different - just ignore me . Anyway... keep it up!

Regards
Jonatan

fanowll 2017-06-26 20:29:17 UTC #10

ok thanks !

fanowll 2017-06-26 20:33:34 UTC #11

hi i won`t ignore you haha
I was thinking that she out of stone, I thank you the tp on the composition that I can give you with the sword or something similar

fanowll 2017-06-26 20:34:33 UTC #12

i`ll work on buldings

fanowll 2017-06-26 22:01:41 UTC #13

berrysquare 2017-06-27 08:44:31 UTC #14

Hei, I am not sure what to think about the angel, but what seems off is that all the grey walues and details are even throughout the image... makes my eyes look everywhere not focusing any certain part. I think you should chose a focal pont, make it sharper and more details. And the rest of the image more simple and tone down. For example the hills are to contrasted... maybe makenig them a bit ligher makes the city pop out more? But thats me. Hope the comment was helpful Otherwise keep up the good work!

fanowll 2017-06-27 16:07:45 UTC #15

hi thanks for the comment , iwant the angel to pop out so i´ll make the mountains lighter and contrast other parts.

fanowll 2017-06-28 22:48:25 UTC #16

fanowll 2017-06-29 23:04:35 UTC #17

fanowll 2017-07-10 21:03:26 UTC #18

fanowll 2017-07-11 22:23:53 UTC #19

jonatan-moonchild 2017-07-12 08:39:41 UTC #20

Nice to see you progressing!

If I would add another two cents - I think it wouldn't be bad to struggle a bit for lighting consistency. Currently different objects in the scene seems to be lighted from different directions which creates unreal effect. If you have some skills in any 3D software (even Sketchup will do - a few hours should be enough to get the basics) then few simple shapes and set light would be very helpful. Additionally - assuming that wall in the center is cylindrical - perspective seems to be a little bit off. I mean the upper edge - it goes straight, horizontally and then suddenly turns to the front. Adding appropriate curve to the back edge will solve the problem (again - assuming cylindrical shape).

Keep the progress going

Regards
Jonatan