I really like the compostion so far... For the hair: you should see the hair as compact forms and not draw every single hair itself >https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VDIuwfkRoeo< marc has a tutorial for it, I donΒ΄t know if you check this one ... For the lighting: you got more a ambient light; try to define from where your main light is coming (you can even draw a arrow, sun, ball .... as guide, not included in the finished piece)... and maybe give your characters a rim light also.... Good luck
Suggested Topics
Topic | Category | Replies | Views | Activity |
---|---|---|---|---|
Character/ concept critique | Art Critique | 2 | 1.0k | May '22 |
Jinx Fanart WIP | Art Critique | 7 | 3.5k | Dec '21 |
Help me with my planes structure | Art Critique | 1 | 1.1k | Jul '22 |
Looking forward for your comments | Art Critique | 0 | 927 | May '18 |
Redoing an old piece | Art Critique | 1 | 964 | Oct '18 |