This is pretty cool. One thing that stands out though are the hands. The left hand is a little harder to see so I'll talk about the right hand. The pinky and ring fingers should be going towards the center of the palm. If you look at your own hand, you'll notice when the fingers curl inwards to the palm, there's this slight angle to them. I also think you can add some folds to the gloves more. As of now it looks like she has a white hand instead of wearing a glove.
I do like her express and pose as well as the rim light you added here. The hair is nice and flowy Keep up the good work.