With the photobash i think it might help you to consider the values, the grey scale of the image. There is very little contrast in both images, but if anything the island house popped more as it was darker against the lighter mountain in the first image.
Basically without contrast the image becomes very busy and hard to decide where to look or what is more important. Now im no expert at this, but hope this helps.

I’m only halfway through the figure drawing video and I didn’t check the assignment for it yet so i just listen to the video and did my own practice. I was really bad at drawing gestures since i didnt understand even with other tutorials or my previous school lectures taught me. But this is so far what I get, so hope there is someone out there can criticize or advice me in these practice.

hey, I think you did a great job with the nude drawing assignment. I ´d suggest to draw the full ellipse because this makes the line wrap around the form more and can make a difference in the end. The video has also a great advice at the end where marc shows how you can check yourself for mistakes :smile:

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Hi! I like your recent gestures, they got a lot of energy! Some cool references too i see.

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Hi , I got inactive for quite some time. So I forgot some of the practice and redo those that I forgot how to do. So here's a redraw of the room assignment. Hope you guy's can give me some advice on this