Vardanian's Art Journey

vardanian 2020-04-25 21:35:41 UTC #22

Apple White portrait from a couple days back. Polishing that Sakimichan style. Did anyone watch this cartoon? Man it was good.

HMC from today. I actually would like some feedback on this one! I'm not experienced in pieces like this, and would like some pointers regarding, well, basically everything

serovero 2020-04-26 08:22:19 UTC #23

Really great stuff you have here @vardanian

Dabel 2020-04-26 12:33:17 UTC #24

What I would do on your HMC's piece:

I think that a stronger composition would be the main factor to strengthen your piece more. The scaling up of the focal points can be aesthetically and realistically valid since I believe you chose a telephoto lens for the shot i.e. flatten perspective. Everything else to me seems to be details such as practical contrast, correct lighting, etc.

Take it for what it's worth it is only my opinion Cool stuff!

ggrazziano 2020-04-27 13:26:16 UTC #25

That is a good suggestion Dabel. I would also reduce the castle, creating three planes: First) the flowers, Second) the characters, Third) the castle.

Keep working Vardanian, you have a great work!

vardanian 2020-05-09 14:24:13 UTC #26

Guys, thank you so much for the feedback!! <3 I'll try to apply it

I forgot to post here : )

26.4, study

30.4, fanart of Nadiaaxel's character

old DTIYS

3.5, mermay. This one was such a headache.

8.5, mermay 2. Background is from a photo.