A little sketch and my own review on it!

luurquiola 2016-10-02 04:06:29 UTC #1

I'm new in the forum guys, so made this little sketch just to show you my style at this point! I was just starting to cleaning up the first one (Left) when I notice I wasn't happy with her rythm, so made another quick shot of her (Right) testing new colors and fixing her pose! What you think bros? I will keep working on her, maybe do a background and fix the composition.

fathomcube 2016-10-02 04:21:06 UTC #2

Hmmmmmmmmmmmm......well if i were to point something out....it would be on balance. You see on the left image her leg is forward....so i can see how she "would" balance herself. On the right both legs seem to be pointing back so it would seem like she's tipping forward. nothing wrong with that though. If shes falling forward then play with that pose...if shes balancing play with that too. This is more of an observation than an actual critique.

     - I can't put my thumb on it really

luurquiola 2016-10-03 00:23:32 UTC #3

Actualyl didn't thought about the leg! Well seen thank you!

thunderdumpling 2016-10-03 04:55:38 UTC #4

Physics is also something you should keep in mind. Her breasts are too high and are defying gravity. However the pose that she is making seems like a mid air jump dancer thing. If so, then it seem alright then.