Good start. I missed some details, and the pen looks a little bit strange. Have you draw more variations of the character?

8 days later

these are the basic front lines of the character.im gonna add some more details after the painting phase and in the next days a small lore of the character and some sketches that brought me to her creation,as quell as the work in progress for the final project.
dont mind giving me some critics and advices!

sorry if i reply now but i was really busy this week,i have done this sketches for shapes and colors,i like the bottom left one and i think im gonna work on that,tomorrow i will update some face sketches i think

12 days later

it is a really nice idea make her weapon look like a stylus , nice touch

i will change hair in the first one i like this much more

Great idea with the stylus weapon and i really like the new haircut and a green hologram thingie under her eye.
Who's that little robot flying above, her familiar?

im working on that little guy today and tomorrow you will see what he can do soon : D