Thanks a lot for the pant over. Really appreciate it. This really does help
I'll try to apply this as I add the last details to my character with the final design stuff. Hopefully the balance of things don't break. Glad you like the story in the piece as well. it was the main thing I tried to work on.
So I didn't sleep yet but now I'm tired(little pass 7 am as I write this). Will do a final push when I wake up again. Spent a lot of time on the hair to get it just right. Hopefully it looks decent so far. Just need an ambient blue light on her and a few other things and we should be done. Also if you noticed already, somebody is angry...
@aeguilrod Yeah bro. Just one more push.
@meonika Thank you very much. Like Tracer said, "The World can always use more heroes" Glad you notice the little things.
I want to take this quick opportunity to thank every single person that support me and helped me. I really do appreciate it and it really helped me grow a lot. You guys made it very fun and challenging. I am finally done. Here is my Final. Hope you guys enjoy.
(FINAL IS ALSO AT THE TOP)
"Character Concept Sheet"
"Final Illustration"
It's really inspiring how much work you've put into this. The final is looking great!
I don't know if it's too late now, but I think the composition might have looked better being portrait instead of landscape. I say this because it would give your character a stronger focus. At the moment I see your character first (which is good) but then my eye gets confused and is led outside the painting. As for the storytelling, it's hard to tell what's going on. Is she being ambushed? Why is she posing like that?
I really like the the mood and atmosphere you've created with the colours for the forest. Love how you painted the rocks. Really awesome. I think your character could stand out a little more though, at the moment there are some areas such as the waist and feet that blend into the background. Other parts of her look kind of flat and could use more defining of the forms. The lighting seems a bit confusing too. I think the light is coming from the front, yet it feels like it is coming from behind. Her legs don't look like they're in the shadow.
The character design is great, and the amount of effort you've put into it is really motivating for me. Great simple colour palette and nice use of shapes.
I'm sorry if this sounds nit picky or discouraging. Especially after all the hard work and hours you've spent on it. I hope this will help you for your future pieces and I wish you the best of luck on the competition!
@Slava_Gedich Thank you very much. TEAM SCI-FI!
@Jamethy Appreciate the feedback. I do believe it will help for my future pieces. No need to feel sorry. Glad you told me what you thought. Feedback is always welcomed.
Malcom I am so glad you made it my friend! The concept sheet looks really nice and the illustration as well. I am especially digging the colourful painterly style which u executed here. But the best outcome of it all is how much u've tried and learned during the process. Wish u luck in the competition ^^
@andrewnimble Ah man thanks and thank you for the support and feedback. It really pushed me to keep going and continue to work hard.
No problem mate. I'm so glad I could help even a tiny little bit. It truly is awesome how few words from a different person can motivate an artist to keep going and keep improving what he/she does. I feel that myself ofc whenever someone leaves me feedback. I am so glad this forum is such a friendly and helpful place full of great people and "team-spirit" ^^ Looking forward to see more of your progress after the competition.
@andrewnimble thank you. I'm also happy that cubebursh is such a great friendly place for all as well. We work together to grow together.
I like it. It's really warm and cozy which is definitely a strange thing to say about a sci fy image, especially environmentwise. You can almost imagine a melody from looking at this. I like her design and I like the amount of color and life coming from this. Even though she is relatively small the composition really compliments her and gives her the stage and center of the image. I like the light between the trees shine on her. that's a nice touch.
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