Ok, I willl begin this thread with my ArtWar submission. I banged my head against the wall when I realized I disqualified myself by not putting my concept drawings and front and back views on one sheet. . So now I'm done beating my head, I figure I will go through an overall improvement WIP to see areas the final illustration should have been better.
Right now, just looking at my final submission, I saw the following areas that need to be addressed:
- Like the character but more detail and warmer asset color option should have been taken into consideration
- Final illustration lacks depth...comes across still flat - Thinking this is due to a lack of perspective and lighting
- Background needs more clarity
These are the main things that stick out to me so far. If anyone has any other things to add your more than welcome. I will post update revisions asap.