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Thanks for that. As long as there is conitnuous improvement, I'm glad.

On regards to the blood tone, it is kind of intentional to keep it low for some of these pages.

The idea is that blood is kept low and at a lower tone, slowly increasing in both contrast and amount as the scenes goes on, which can be seen in this other page when compared to a previous one

The scene also intentionally leaves the background white to hopefully give a more impactful contrast with the frame at hand.

The line of thought being that if the contrast and amount increases slowly, it will hopefully increase the impact of a scene like this one, and give the impression that the fight slowly becomes more visceral as it progresses.

That's the idea at least. I'm trying to apply different lessons on different chapters to see how they work as a whole.

Wew, another couple of rough days. But I really want to keep moving forward.

So the next excercice is 3 environments from references.

I... struggle with environments. It's not my forte for now, it takes me too long and it's hard to know how much details is enough, but maybe I just need to practice it more.

So here is the first one.

I first copied the perspective using a 3 vanishing point rule. I super imposed it over the reference, tried to get an accurate perspective rule, then constructed the bases and finally added the details.

I will say, this did force me to analyze the actual strcuture of the buildings. Like, what is the structure of the street under the tents? The walkway on the background that crosses the street seems to connect the building on the right with the plaza on the left. How do they connect?

Small details that you need to understand to draw the structure correctly, especially with perspective.

I could keep stacking and refining more detail, but I think I'll move to the next one.

And as always, a few more manga frames to share! Since these were the ones I worked on since my last post.

And as I learn more in general, I'm pushing to move to a more simple style so I can hopefully draw frames and pages faster. Trying to focus more on simple but atractive design, clean lineart, fewer tones, and much more simple shadows.

Below is an example of what I've been experimenting with.

I think it's simplier, but still looks good, and more importantly, took almost half the time as with other frames.

Anyway, I'll keep practicing and experimenting.

Thanks! I believe the core of the excercice is to capture the overall "feeling" and not get too hung up on the small details. Especially to capture and understand the perspective the author was using.
I feel like, as long that objective is met, that's good.

Thanks! Your encouragement and everyone's has really helped me get this far!
Though I keep reminding myself there's still much to do, but one step at a time.

I wish you the best of luck with it! Everyone has a different pipeline and way to work, but something that has really helped me with the manga is to just jump into it and try to do the best I can with what I have. Self analyze, and make a conscious effort to improve. Not much different from how we are studying art, or any other skill really.

I'm eager to see what you put out when you are ready for it! It's always encouraging to see the works of others.

Thanks!

And I think you're right on the ankle shade! I'll add those edits a bit later today.

Small update today. Simply completed exercice 2 for clothes.

The model:

Dressed up:

Figured it would be fun to have her cosplay as Haley from Stardew Valley.
I used gradient shading to apply the colors, and a correction layer to adjust saturation.

The shirt is a bit tight by design, but there are still some notable tensions points, like the buttons.

It was an interesting exercice. Next is 10 clothed references (linearts). I think I have an idea on what to do with those, though I think those will take some time.

Thanks! you'll have noticed that even if the exercice is for lineart only I make an effort to add some shading to it. Not only do I feel it makes it look better (and make me happier with the result), but I've been trying to do a conscious effort to practice shading as much as possible to get better at it. I feel it's one of those things that help the most and is many times hard to get right.

Move on to the 10 cloth exercices from photos.

Since this is about clothes analysis, figured I would use the oportunity to dress up some of my manga characters while still keeping the reference clothes.
That way I can also practice refining some of the designs I'm working on.
So in general, I'm aiming to imitate, by copying, even if it's not completly a copy. not sure if that makes sense.

It's gona take a while to do all 10, especially since I insist on adding some shading, but here are the first two:

And another recent page from the manga. Very happy how this one turned out. I'm trying to play around with some effects and framing.

I'll probably post again until I complete some of them, which will take a while as I work on the manga in paralel.