Thank you! I finally cleaned that up. Meanwhile started 3 more ..I have a habit of taking too long to finish a piece, then I lose interest in it and just start something else. I found 8 from recently i started and abandoned, that are decent enough to not delete, but not finished. There’s also been a number of drawings I felt I “outgrew” - became better before I finished them, and it would be easier to start from scratch than fix them. Anyone else thinking that?in24.3k
Lady Death Fanart Collectible: Part 6 Polypaint and base Hi, it’s time to share with you another part of the process to create this fanart piece. Polypaint As this is my first collectible fanart I didn’t have previous experience with polypaint so I tried my best and played a bit with it.I wanted to give a ghostly and eerie look to Lady Death, she is beautiful and deadly, but at the end of the day she is a woman that died and was reborn at hell as an avenging spirit, that’s why I gave her skin tone a bluish very cold tone.As you will see I gave myself some creative freedom to deviate from the traditional color scheme that this characater has in comics and illustrations.To add a bit of sensuality by painting some freckles on the face and the chest. The dark nature of this character was the perfect excuse to gave her a kind of goth make up, very dark shadows around the eyes, blue lips and fingernails. I know that the original character includes sexy red lips but I wanted this girl to have a sexy but at the same time creepy look, that’s why we can see some thin veins emanating from her eyes. The biggest chromatic change I did for this character is at the hair. Lady Death has a characteristic white weavy hair but in my fanart I decided to gave her a very saturated blue color.The reason behind this wasn’t only an aesthetic choice. I want that the face area strongly pulls the attention of the viewer so this area needed a stronger contrast. Another reason is that I want her to have a more modern look, as I mentioned before, I’m strongly attracted to women with goth/punk look. I gave myself half an hour or more to analyse the work of experienced sculptors that create collectibles and I discovered that the use of darker values on the skin is often applied to create a greater sense of volume and three-dimensionality. I found that areas with heavy ambient occlusion are the perfect places to paint with darker colors in order to increase the separation between different forms. Even though she has a bluish skin tone, I used a bit of warmer hues in areas that, in real life, tend to go towards red and pink, this is very obvious in the nose, cheeks, and knuckles. Thinking with a logical mind it’s completely absurd to have warmer tones on the body of a zombie like creature but I didn’t want to limit myself by using only blue tones, it looks boring and artificial. In real life these colors are created by blood vessels in areas where the skin is very thin. ** Scythe **for her weapon I applied a cool gray with some warmer variations, this color scheme is influenced by the work of H.R giger. Base I’d like to talk about the design for the base which, to be honest, I forgot to develop along with the character.My main idea with the base is to show that Lady Death inhabits a very sterile and arid land, at the end of the day she is at hell.You can see a that she walks over dirt and rocks, a sign that she’s surrounded by death and loneliness. As part of the landscape we can see some bones and skulls to reinforce the idea of lack of living creatures, yet we can see three hands that try to reach her legs.This hands represent that all creatures are subordinated to her power and seek an evil blessing with a simple touch of the princess of the damned.1- The hand with skin burns represents the souls of those who are newcomers to hell, tortured souls that suffer for the sins comitted on earth.2- The hand with greenish rotten skin and pustules is the reminder of the decay that has infected the souls of those who have been trapped and have forgotten their humanity3- Last but not least, the hand of a demon shows that even dark creatures and entities bow before her presence. The cherry on the top, at least in my vision, are the simese twins that emerge from the ground, this malevolent creatures remind us that in hell there’s only perversion and any trace of innocence is lost. Thanks for reading till this pointI’m really happy to be very close to finish this creative journey, last but not least it’s mandatory to talk about splitting the sculpture in several pieces to be printed, this will be my last entry before showing the final rendered images. See yaMay Zbrush be with youin1.4k
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Hello! My name is Vithor, I am from Brazil, studied Design at a local college worked as an illustrator for more than 10 years. I took a time off around 3 years ago and am trying to get back in my art shape and maybe become professional again. Here are some recent pictures: You can find timelapses for most of them on my instagram: www.instagram.com Vithor Albertim (@vithor_albertim) • Instagram photos and videos 123 Followers, 638 Following, 19 Posts - See Instagram photos and videos from Vithor Albertim (@vithor_albertim) Comments and critiques are always welcome.Cheers!in795
Thank you @daceronine! If I remember I save in google cloud, I will have to stick a note to do it more often. Lamp is from life. Poses are from refs but I look at refs for a while and then try to do it myself and look it up if needed. Outfits and rest is from imagination Something went wrong while installing system so we will have to wipe everything again... pc works but something is wrong. We will wait till internet is done and I will save everything on cloud this time Threads came out in eu. It's been 3 days and I had more engagement than after half a year on instagram. It feels really nice I hope it stays this way A portrait of old dude. It's the same character I posted a while ago. Inspired by Bayard Wu work. At first I thought of him as a bear but I named him Fenrir and I think wolf suits him better. Eye gave me a bit of hard time but I think it is fine now. I focused on face and forgot about area below. The way I draw hair clashes with greying hair. I had the same problem while doing Lohse's white hair. Does it looks like it is greying here? I love how desaturated red looks blue there. I keep lying to myself that I will use different color scheme but It all comes down to this blue and yellowish one it is just flipped this time Have a great day!in48.2k
Yes, you're using the forums right! Also, welcome! But;
Wow! This is really great, but I think you've come quite far and it might be a bit problematic to change composition. Either way, there are a couple things that seem weird.
Overall, the composition seems really good, its dynamic and its interesting. The main problem with it right NOW, are perhaps the complexity ratios, which contribute to leading the eye and contribute to composition. Now, what I mean is that, its very "clustery" right now, but there are ways of getting around that. Right now, even your background has a lot of detail (and I don't mean the robot). The environment around your character is a bit too detailed, and it takes away from her. Besides, it seems a bit abstract, as most of the pieces are either cut out (due to not fitting in the dynamic frame) or are simply too technological. This makes these assets kind of a waste, and I don't mean that in a rude way. Consider adding elements that contributes to the story and piece, or making them at least have purpose. You should be able to point at one of those background elements and say "oh, thats a laser" or "oh, that is a weapon". In this scenario, you have some sort of round objects with cables, (we can understand cables), but what about the rest?
The reason I bring this up, is because, if it doesn't at least make visual sense, and it has a lot of detail, then it contributes to the cluster and destabilises the composition.
Now, I'm probably being too strict right now, as sci-fi tends to have cluster, and I don't mind those circle things too much. What does make it weird though, are all the different shapes. You have circles, squares, triangles and many different organic shapes, which makes the shapelanguage of the scene confusing. Especially with the bottom left corner being cut out, making ABSTRACT shapes.
Oh, sidenote; I didn't realize that the white spot to the right was a screen, it seemed more like it was yet another window until I closely inspected the frames and such. Not saying that is bad, and it is probably my mistake, but a general design advice is to avoid confusion, and make things obvious!
Now, second thing that that is affecting the composition at the moment, and that are values.
Now, your values are kind of great, they work really well from above, where the character brightly stands out due to the dark background. However, when you start going down, it becomes more clustery with details and everything becomes more gray due to low contrast. You can likely get away with this by cranking up the contrast on the character, but you could do with simply separating her by adding shadows between her and the other things.
In the end, I think this is a great piece. I really love it. I really love this conceptual robotic arm that she is using, and you're flaunting it in the middle of the composition, it is logical and it contributes strongly to what is happening. Anyway, keep up the good work! Hopefully this was helpful. 
Thank you for the amazing critique . I don't do backgrounds much so my composition skills are lacking, I also noticed the complexity of my background and felt there was something wrong that I was missing, thank you for pointing that out. The bottom left monitor was a horrible design in my opinion, and when drawing it I had realized that it didn't fit well with the rest of the piece. In terms of the monitor on the right I also felt like it could appear to be another window, the way I was going to fix that was the odd some kinda of language and interface to it so that it would differ from the window on the right. The lower part of my character seems less defined compared to the top again, due to contrast. I tried to fix it by contrasting the value of the seat to her suit hoping this would help.
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