Hello 
I've been doing a couple of digital art for a while but its kind of hard for me to tell what areas I need to improve as most of them barely gets attention. I can understand that but its hard for me to tell which area I should Improve and which one is 'fine'...I cant really judge them by myself cause I..dont trust myself lmao...anyway
First I would like to know how's my lighting,composition and details that I did on this artwork...particularly the lighting....it feels like something's off..
(PS: this is recreation of my little sister's artwork lol. here's the comparison:
https://majesticotter.deviantart.com/art/Recreating-my-little-sisters-s-artwork-1-716530696)
on this second artwork, I need help on how I can improve this in terms of composition, perspective and details....
I can tell this is...terrible....but I'm running out what to add and how to make it interesting
feel free to draw or paint over on them to indicate, correct ,ect ect. something)
anyway thank you 
