Aaaaand it's way better!

I love how as I scrolled down, she got closer and closer, haha! Nice. I'd just make the ribbon pull in the focus harder (i.e making the ribbon closer to the camera).

Magnificent! So dynamic picture! I like this sword and its effect. Maybe just move and rotate it a little to not overlap her and not create one line with the bow?

You're a brave man, decided to change everything so close to the deadline. And i like your changes! Hope you'll make it in time. Good luck!