Oct '17

Looking Good,

I see you've taken out the wires/Lines. I preferred them in. It looks too blocky and mechanical now from the previous wip and too harsh, try to keep some of those softer rounder egde's.

Also just be careful with your colours and values. The sky in the right has too much contrast with the yellow.

Oct '17

Thank you. I removed the wires temporarily, soon will appear.

Oct '17

Hey, Nice one!

Really loving the levitating structures now.

Um, but few things I feel I would change and add.

I would remove the little rock in the center.
I don't feel it does anything but break-up the line.
Add mist/ shadows around the bottom edges of your rocky mountains. Again to make them less harsh.

Oct '17

Yup, totally agree, the middle mountain is disruptive there, perhaps you can move it closer to the mid-left side mountain with the tower to avoid messing with the rope. and yes, some mist or similar effect would be nice on some of the mountains. Nice job overall, keep it up!

Oct '17

Awesome work! Turned out great :smile: Good luck!

Oct '17

It looks very nice and moody! I like the idea of the floating land masses. Nice work and good luck!