This is painting a did a few months ago, I honestly didn't like how it came out but valid critique is much appreciated

[timonboyd]

[brohawx]

Okay then answer these.

What did you not like about it?
What were you struggling with while you were making it that made you settle for what you made?

What was your intention? "I wanted to make a portrait study photocopy," "I wanted to style it like this (instert artist)" "I wanted to bla bla bla"

I'll give you some valid critique if you respond.

[timonboyd]

I'm still learning clip studio paint & what I don't like its that my Brush strokes are muddy looking & It just looks smeared.

I was hoping for something more Noriyoshi Ohrai style because he is my biggest influence.

[brohawx]

Open image in new tabs or save as to see full size. Looks like you can also click on it for full size too. Just trying something new. Learned forum image limit is 3500px! Good to know for the future!
Cheers