WIP Necromancer/Mage

[ashleycassaday]

Hi all! This is my first post here and I'm hoping for some constructive criticism. I started this today and I'm liking my progress so far, but something about the colors isn't sitting well with me, mainly with the clothing vs background and such. Any other feedback would be much appreciated. Thanks all!

[gariusisonline]

I think what's happening here is that, even though technically green is cooler than red, you have a green for background that is not only a little on the bright side, but also on the warmer side, making it more powerful than the reddish clothing. Hence, making the background pop out more than the foreground. I guess try using a cooler green, blue green, for the background. Or, you can make a clothing on the orangey side.

Also, add more value on her. Make her a little contrasty.

Hope it helps,
Cheers!

[enalya]

Hey! I really like your style and the stylized feel, especially that leg in front. Your values and rendering are good

Here's my paintover and feedback:

- I think her head is a bit large relatively.
- Her right thumb can't bend that far, the hand has a weird shape. The staff goes a bit through her left hand.
- Her left leg (behind) should be placed to the right more (from our p.o.v.), because there is no space for female genitals now D:
- I actually like the colors. You could push the magenta more (use Selective Color) and up things a bit with Levels.

Keep it up