Cowgirl critque

moirae 2019-11-05 14:10:34 UTC #1

A little girl wished upon a star to be grown up with magical unicorn powers to fight evil.
Is having some regrets. And rage issues.
This is an old character of mine that I did for an art challenge, and am starting her again from scratch as I didn't like how it came out the last time.
I'm halfway through it and just wanted peoples thoughts and critiques whilst it's still at a point where I can easily make adjustments. I'm going to give her a suitable metal logo on her shirt.

moirae 2019-11-11 15:35:49 UTC #2

Progress.

moirae 2019-11-17 20:30:51 UTC #3

Well, might as well put in a background. Next step. Critique appreciated.

cedricgo 2019-11-18 00:45:25 UTC #4

Damn, that's one crazy character design

As for critiques, remember that the sky color will affect the colors of the parts facing upwards, so you'd get some lighter blueish hues on everything facing up. And you would get some warm bouncelight from the sand. It's just something to keep in mind in order to make the character feel like it's part of the environment.

moirae 2019-12-16 19:33:29 UTC #5

Went back to basics and sorted out the anatomy, horse heads, etc.
Probably not going to do much on this with the artwar starting, but thought I'd post this anyway.

kameliya-minkova 2020-02-10 15:50:38 UTC #6

This is such a fun design! Honestly great work! Id love to see this as a concept sheet for something like a mobile game! You should draw a turnaround

moirae 2020-02-12 13:37:36 UTC #7

Okay, made a bit of a start now my artwar entry is finished.

moirae 2020-02-18 16:50:44 UTC #8

Not sure what I'm doing with the background.

moirae 2020-02-25 13:34:41 UTC #9

Comments critiques welcome.

cerebro-iv 2020-04-01 16:11:38 UTC #10

Ok when I saw cowgirl in the title, I did not expect this!
Such a crazy design. How does she fire her guns? Does her hand end in the mouth of the unicorn? If so she got very long arm.
Also how does she walk like that? Where exactly is her feets? The way they are inserted into the neck, if she were to stand up straight it look so weird and not make sense.

However I'm critique an already weird concept, not meant to be taken seriously. So I don't know if it right to argue about correct anatomy. As for everything else it loom fine, like the background of a shootout in town. It seem like you had fun drawing this.