Critiques and Opinions on O.C

[damian-bradir]

Hi, guys. I'm (very) new here. Name's Damian, self-thought artist. I'm currently working on my O.C for my project and I would appreciate your opinions and critiques. Thanks.

I still haven't decided on the color palette for my character yet so I just draw in greyscale. I'm also can't decided which style of painting, I do like smooth blending kinda painting but I also love a rough and visible brush strokes.

Facts About Her: 19 years old, Elf slave, all-black eyes.

1. The Rough
   

   

2. The Smooth
   

   

[archsider]

do more rendering , I guess
The face looks great , the year and hair needs work. parts of the ear be in shadow.
Have fun :3

[damian-bradir]

Thank you so much, really appreciate it.