Thank you! I finally cleaned that up. Meanwhile started 3 more ..I have a habit of taking too long to finish a piece, then I lose interest in it and just start something else. I found 8 from recently i started and abandoned, that are decent enough to not delete, but not finished. There’s also been a number of drawings I felt I “outgrew” - became better before I finished them, and it would be easier to start from scratch than fix them. Anyone else thinking that?in24.3k
Lady Death Fanart Collectible: Part 6 Polypaint and base Hi, it’s time to share with you another part of the process to create this fanart piece. Polypaint As this is my first collectible fanart I didn’t have previous experience with polypaint so I tried my best and played a bit with it.I wanted to give a ghostly and eerie look to Lady Death, she is beautiful and deadly, but at the end of the day she is a woman that died and was reborn at hell as an avenging spirit, that’s why I gave her skin tone a bluish very cold tone.As you will see I gave myself some creative freedom to deviate from the traditional color scheme that this characater has in comics and illustrations.To add a bit of sensuality by painting some freckles on the face and the chest. The dark nature of this character was the perfect excuse to gave her a kind of goth make up, very dark shadows around the eyes, blue lips and fingernails. I know that the original character includes sexy red lips but I wanted this girl to have a sexy but at the same time creepy look, that’s why we can see some thin veins emanating from her eyes. The biggest chromatic change I did for this character is at the hair. Lady Death has a characteristic white weavy hair but in my fanart I decided to gave her a very saturated blue color.The reason behind this wasn’t only an aesthetic choice. I want that the face area strongly pulls the attention of the viewer so this area needed a stronger contrast. Another reason is that I want her to have a more modern look, as I mentioned before, I’m strongly attracted to women with goth/punk look. I gave myself half an hour or more to analyse the work of experienced sculptors that create collectibles and I discovered that the use of darker values on the skin is often applied to create a greater sense of volume and three-dimensionality. I found that areas with heavy ambient occlusion are the perfect places to paint with darker colors in order to increase the separation between different forms. Even though she has a bluish skin tone, I used a bit of warmer hues in areas that, in real life, tend to go towards red and pink, this is very obvious in the nose, cheeks, and knuckles. Thinking with a logical mind it’s completely absurd to have warmer tones on the body of a zombie like creature but I didn’t want to limit myself by using only blue tones, it looks boring and artificial. In real life these colors are created by blood vessels in areas where the skin is very thin. ** Scythe **for her weapon I applied a cool gray with some warmer variations, this color scheme is influenced by the work of H.R giger. Base I’d like to talk about the design for the base which, to be honest, I forgot to develop along with the character.My main idea with the base is to show that Lady Death inhabits a very sterile and arid land, at the end of the day she is at hell.You can see a that she walks over dirt and rocks, a sign that she’s surrounded by death and loneliness. As part of the landscape we can see some bones and skulls to reinforce the idea of lack of living creatures, yet we can see three hands that try to reach her legs.This hands represent that all creatures are subordinated to her power and seek an evil blessing with a simple touch of the princess of the damned.1- The hand with skin burns represents the souls of those who are newcomers to hell, tortured souls that suffer for the sins comitted on earth.2- The hand with greenish rotten skin and pustules is the reminder of the decay that has infected the souls of those who have been trapped and have forgotten their humanity3- Last but not least, the hand of a demon shows that even dark creatures and entities bow before her presence. The cherry on the top, at least in my vision, are the simese twins that emerge from the ground, this malevolent creatures remind us that in hell there’s only perversion and any trace of innocence is lost. Thanks for reading till this pointI’m really happy to be very close to finish this creative journey, last but not least it’s mandatory to talk about splitting the sculpture in several pieces to be printed, this will be my last entry before showing the final rendered images. See yaMay Zbrush be with youin1.4k
memory 2min gartic phone, used ref 2m gartic, used ref for pose 2min gartic 2min gartic 2min gartic 2min gartic memory memory memory memory study memory memory memorymemory memory memory memory memory memory study memorystudy study stylized left memory, right study study memory memorymemory memory memory memorymemory memory, porportions r offmemory memorystudystudy memorymemorymemory memory memory memory memory memory memory memory, right leg is a bit broken The feeling of only getting 1 - 3 likes on a social media post will never not be discouraging. But nothing is discouraging enough to make me quit drawing. I think the strategy of drawing a lot of stuff and waiting a while to post is good though rather than posting it immediately and then feeling that sadness on the next set of drawingin
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Hello! My name is Vithor, I am from Brazil, studied Design at a local college worked as an illustrator for more than 10 years. I took a time off around 3 years ago and am trying to get back in my art shape and maybe become professional again. Here are some recent pictures: You can find timelapses for most of them on my instagram: www.instagram.com Vithor Albertim (@vithor_albertim) • Instagram photos and videos 123 Followers, 638 Following, 19 Posts - See Instagram photos and videos from Vithor Albertim (@vithor_albertim) Comments and critiques are always welcome.Cheers!in795
Thank you @daceronine! If I remember I save in google cloud, I will have to stick a note to do it more often. Lamp is from life. Poses are from refs but I look at refs for a while and then try to do it myself and look it up if needed. Outfits and rest is from imagination Something went wrong while installing system so we will have to wipe everything again... pc works but something is wrong. We will wait till internet is done and I will save everything on cloud this time Threads came out in eu. It's been 3 days and I had more engagement than after half a year on instagram. It feels really nice I hope it stays this way A portrait of old dude. It's the same character I posted a while ago. Inspired by Bayard Wu work. At first I thought of him as a bear but I named him Fenrir and I think wolf suits him better. Eye gave me a bit of hard time but I think it is fine now. I focused on face and forgot about area below. The way I draw hair clashes with greying hair. I had the same problem while doing Lohse's white hair. Does it looks like it is greying here? I love how desaturated red looks blue there. I keep lying to myself that I will use different color scheme but It all comes down to this blue and yellowish one it is just flipped this time Have a great day!in48.2k
Hey maybe blur out the background to really focus more on the girls face.. Also
in the picture a lot of her features (lips, eyes, nose) seem to be meshing together so I would try to separate them more.
I hope this helps
The only thing I really notice would be that her eyes are fairly large and don't look wet. Yea, you have some highlights on the iris and pupil area; but the white of the eye looks very matte. You could also probably get away with flatting her left cheek inwards a bit as well.
Overall though, this is pretty good. The skin tone and the rest of the coloring (like the hair) is pretty spot on. The shadows are well present adding a nice sense of depth. You could probably add a bit of highlights to the gold border of her shirt's collar though.
They is some proportion and position problems. The head is way to big and the ear are to high for examble.
Also the background is on a closeup/portrait irrelevant. If you want to show the viewer where she is you should go for a mid-shot for examble, because than you have way more space to fill and you avoid that the picture get too noisy.
The colors also a bit tend to go blackish which i would mostly try to avoid.
Here a Overpaint:
Cheers!
Would suggest simplifying things. Try grouping things like eyelashes and strands of hair together. It will make it easier to see the forms and make it feel more three-dimensional even with less detail. To avoid getting to caught up in details and instead focus on the broader things I would suggest zooming out a lot, also squinting at the image is nice. Try having some hard edges in the image. The ones I'm seeing are in the background and around the silhouette which draws a lot of attention from the focal point.
Here is an overpaint as well
@shiv0r I feel that you lost a lot of what made the original picture special and just created a similar-ish character in a similar pose. While I do like your overpaint for its own reasons, you changed way too much from what the original was. The tone is different, the color is different, the environment is different, the focal point is different, the character looks nothing like she did before, none of the features are even similiar 
@chassler11 These changes are spot-on, especially around the eye!
@fprbros Nice work with the original! My first though for critique though was at the focal point, the eye: her eyelashes were too light and didn't cast a sharp enough shadow on the eye, making it a bit flat. I also suggest checking out some online hair tutorials. It looks like your just taking a streaky brush and running it down where the hair would be. You should try inside blocking out sections of hair with a thicker brush and adding detail in from there. Maybe this or this could be helpful.
@unilluminated Of course i changed the colors because they are not working quite well in the original. Even if he want more local colors, i would shift them subtle or use a limited colorpalette to make the shadows colder and the light warmer. Changing the blackish hair to more brownish hair and the black iris to green is not a big deal. Also give some more childish characteristics because as long the base is right you can adjust it pretty easy in digital and the base is in his picture not right.
The same with the environment why i should keep the trees if it makes the picture busy and i suggest anyway if he want to show where she is to expand the view to a mid shot. If he want to go close up/portrait remove it, because it makes the picture busy and noisy from the distance.
He dosen't need to copy my image one by one, because it is one direction from countless direction that he can go. The direction should just make sense that's important.
Cheers!
Thank you guys, you are great. Your advices are really helpful.
With the colors the only thing I noticed are the shadows are a little too black and muddy. Adding a different hue to them should fix it, like with @chassler11 did. Its subtle but its there.
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