Hi there,
I want to get feedback and criticism about my painting. I want to know which parts i overworked or underworked like i have to be more lose or tight. Don't hold back please i am not that sensitive and also i believe to for getting better something i have to get harsh truth and critics.
Btw i wrote that poem to reflect his personality and beliefs.
Thank you and have a nice day:)![](https://d1s0ws440m13mk.cloudfront.net/original/3X/4/1/41d8080df5b5b1cacfa6b845e84323109a4327ff.png)