Im gonna agree with @zegalur and they're quick sketch. To make it more dynamic I'd work on the foreshortening and making sure your character isn't smack dab in the middle of the page. Also make sure the gesture/action they are performing flows. Especially with how you have them throwing the dagger; make the arc of the throw obvious to the viewer.
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