Hey @readock I just want to give you some tips on posting on the critique form which is specifically for critiquing art work.
- First off I'm not going to blab uncontrollably I just have a couple points to get across. When posting on this forum it's a great idea to tell the viewers, those who are critiquing your art work. It's tough for me to give you any efficient helpful advice strictly because I can't tell what your going for. The Artist in these forums spend there time helping each other get better, presenting your work with background information and intent helps everyone here a lot. good luck on your artistic journey my cubebrushian companion, I do so wish to see you again someday; may our paths cross again traveler... until then.
Exofley,
Signing out.