Solidegg Art Blog

solidegg 2022-03-13 03:34:39 UTC #1

Critiques Requested

solidegg 2022-03-13 03:35:30 UTC #2

BabyShark_Ash 2022-03-13 19:09:08 UTC #3

What type of critique are you looking for? Animal anatomy? Furries/Human anatomy? Compliments? Criticism?

These are some nice sketches. I suggest adding some color to liven them up a bit, but I think you're on a good track. You made another post about feeling like you're stuck, but these look promising, man. Take one of these, fine-tune a little, color, and you could call it a finished piece.

Mogwai_Z 2022-03-13 20:51:33 UTC #4

I agree with him (Ash).
These look really nicely done! just need to add abit of color to live em up

solidegg 2022-03-14 00:02:41 UTC #5

I wanna know if the anatomy & proportions are correct on the guy in the middle?

creARTive_Paul 2022-03-14 17:06:11 UTC #6

welcome and nice work ... it looks like ur aiming for comic art, the proportions are much more forgiving for that style ... nothing looks totaly off ... for ur middle guy u could bring his shoulders back and make the torso a bit more straight to take some pressure off his knees ... try to imagin how he would walk that sometimes helps ... when ur interested more in that kinda style maybe check out what aaron blaise does, he's a former animateur from disney and focuses on creature design ... looking foreward to see some more

solidegg 2022-03-15 00:22:45 UTC #7

Thank you' i can never tell if the Mid to lower abdomen proportions look right?

solidegg 2022-03-15 02:20:56 UTC #8

Updated sketch

solidegg 2022-03-16 04:03:50 UTC #9

Do the Shoulder's and legs look right?
i know the hands are bad

creARTive_Paul 2022-03-17 17:41:15 UTC #10

nice improvement of the figure ... looks good proportionwise ... ur hands are totally fine that way they are probably not the focal point so u can reduce detail

solidegg 2022-03-19 18:33:21 UTC #11

Okay I've decided to take Marc Brunet's Art School' are there any key topics i should keep in mind in this course?
also do i need to use Photoshop? because i don't have it i use Clip Studio Paint

creARTive_Paul 2022-03-20 13:34:27 UTC #12

sorry i'm not in the art course, but there's an independent topic for that ... they sure can help u out

BabyShark_Ash 2022-03-22 19:44:47 UTC #13

You don't need to use Photoshop because the other art programs have lots of the same equivalents. That being said, it is easier to use Photoshop because it coincides directly with what you're doing. But it's not needed.

Proportions look nice. I like the wolf in the suit. I agree with Paul about the hands--they don't need to have too much detail so therefore remain non-distracting. Keep up the good work. It's great you joined the class!
--Ash

solidegg 2022-08-06 02:50:11 UTC #14

I need to know if I'm going in the right direction with gesture drawing do these have good flow and energy like the refs i used?

solidegg 2022-08-06 02:51:37 UTC #15

Note i did not trace the images' also the refs
you can get here http://cbr.sh/le6vji

brohawx 2022-08-07 05:05:16 UTC #16

Yep they are fine. They pushed the pose action even more than the reference.

You didn’t have to say they weren’t traced. No one is judging you on that. Besides I think most participants here can tell.

Tracing is one of the art terms methods of learning here. If you had to trace them to learn something there is nothing wrong with that. You aren’t competing in some art Olympiad where you have to prove your skills.

Do some more.

creARTive_Paul 2022-08-07 10:17:08 UTC #17

yep ur poses are even more dynamic as the originals, like bro said ... try to build up a routine on doing those and ur naturally improve