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Hi all, this is my first post asking for a critique. I've been working on improving my ability to design characters and I whipped up these two designs last week. I still want to do some work on props, expressions, and gestures for each-- and I know there's even some cleanup needed. Even so, I wanted to see if anybody might have feedback about the basic designs as they stand right now. I'd more than appreciate any and all criticism. Feel free to get as nitty-gritty about any problems you see as you want.
--Giuseppe
For all the mechanical parts on the first design it make sense to draw it also separate in differend views and closer to the viewer to give the viewer a idea how all the joints or how the arm in generally works.
Here an example:https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/xenoblade/images/b/b6/XC2-Poppi-JK-concept-art.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20171204134310
both nice designs to me, especially like the first one, she looks fun! bff in my head
