Very nice picture, and very pleasant usage of greys. I like it.
As far as CC goes...
The change with the stars was a solid choice, the sky was feeling a bit too large of a negative space, you could fiddle with northern lights or something as well, but obviously that would completely steal focus, but given all the lines aiming upwards I do want to look up there already.
The pink shapes in the bottom left corner that are relatively more saturated than the rest of the objects on the lower portion of the canvas keep pulling my eye in even more so than the camp fire, you also have quite a few lines pointing towards it. Is there some reason that you have so much focus on that shape? Because it really seems to steal focus.
