Hello flamer
It seems nice, I really like your progress. Now your image has a strong focal point, and I believe the viewer eyes will stop there.
However, the dark level between foreground and background are looked similar, and as if there were no distance between them. So, if you try to repair, and separate the dark level among foreground, main ground, and background, it will improve your result
Thank you
Thank you @hebronppg and thank you @raedrob You're right about that hebron, it seems like the midground just lost between the foreground and the background. I think it must be value an foreshortening error although there's not much foreshortening to talk about here, maybe just the scales don't add up. I'm gonna fix the issue today ^^
Thank you for your responses ^^
So I've been thinking a lot if I want to work on my piece or should I declare it as a finished piece. I decided to go with a more stunning looking piece. So here's my update:
I've touched up the piece quite a bit I couldn't resist myself to do more with it
So I've changed a lot of parts on the render, added a bit more mist to it.

Also I made an additional concept sheet to summarize my process:
Overall I'm really satisfied with this project It's been quite fun doing it, I think I've learned a lot and also learned a lot from the responses and from people here.
Also I want to thank @volenck, @hebronppg, @raedrob and @obra-kalla for their responses, encouragements and contribution to this project with their advices Thank you guys!
Hey @flamer btw I thought you forgot to include your final result and concept sheet in your first post. Please recheck the rule once more...
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