Late to the thread here, but i am LOVING the amount of thought and ideation you're putting in. I do the same myself! The final composition is coming along very nicely! If you're looking for any sort of feedback, I'd say the main focal point (Nur) is being a bit lost with all the stuff behind him. That's my opinion at least, and it's nitpicky because I love what you have going on.
ayy. thanks @pencilequipped ! ill keep that in mind fosho! <3
also, i finally just crunched down my image and went berzerk on it. xD i was feeling pressed for time, because i have newyears/bday plans, so i just went nuts on this thing... then after the workday, i found out that the deadline was extended. lol. xD
Looking really great and I do love the perspective work if I didn't say that before.
One thing that stands out in the current image is that the car does not really look like its interacting with the shield yet. Apologies if you just aren't there yet, but perhaps having the tire leave a golden interaction stream along where it is ramping off into the air along the shield.
Its looking really good, love the new layout.
oh wow! its been forever since ive posted! i got caught by holiday plans but im still workin on the piece while i can. hehe.
@sanguine @petrovod thanks guys! i appreciate the kind words. <3
@tck thanks buddy. still arriving at the right hues, but yeah. the separation helps a lot.


@PeterH thanks peter. still working on it, but ive been putting that off, since the intersection is a rough thing to design. xD the bright line is gonna mess up my silhouette, so i have no idea how im gonna pull it off when i get around to it. send me your energy! \o/ haha
Faq page: https://forums.cubebrush.co/t/2d-submission-requirements/6047
Halfway down it mentions canvas size.
It also seems to be the place to ask technical questions, so put your question up there if you want a moderator to answer.
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Nur
Before the war (the Artwar) Nur coincidentally paired with a symbiotic AI. the AI needs a human brain to survive since the human brain possesses the computing power for it to remain conscious. nanotechnology just isn't where it needs to be for the AI to exist autonomously. it jumped from host to host, using a combination of the previous (dead) hosts brain matter and convenient mechanical scraps to subsist autonomously for a short while. Then, it met Nur, the perfect companion. The transition was difficult, to say the least, but after only a month, integration was haphazardly achieved.
Through a combination of mechanical, digital, and organic means, the advanced AI allowed Nur to access and control the deepest recesses of his mind and spirit. as Nur dived deeper, with the aid of the AI, he found something unexpected. Deep within his subconscious, he found a link to his spirit, and within his spirit, he inexplicably found a connection with everything around him. At the time, this was considered an anomaly by the AI, since the AI did not experience this with any of its previous hosts, but then again, it didn't spend as much time with them. There was much discussion about the topic.
Eventually, the AI conceded to Nur and actually found the anomaly intriguing. The cooperation between Nur and the AI allowed them to pursue the matter further. With the logic of the AI and the perseverance of Nur, they were able to dive deeper than ever before, into the inner machinations of the spirit of Nur. Through this endeavor, Nur developed psychic powers; telekinesis being one of them. More importantly, and most curiously, they both came to believe in god, stating "I have explored every corner of my inner being. I understand most of it. However, it's funny. Even with all the answers, we have come to the conclusion that, and I quote, 'rationality does not always end with an understanding of the problem.' The deeper we went, we only found more questions. We were left with no choice but to embrace my spirit and all of its mysteries. And when we did, completely... I heard something that shook me to the core. I felt what could only be described as a whisper from all around me. Stranger still...The AI felt it too."