ART WAR 4 | 2D | War of the Elements | Ember White | stefankoidl

[stefankoidl]

Well that's still a though decision, IG followers voted for nr2 but it was pretty close with nr1.
I am currently working on nr2, if i am not happy with the final result; or time is left im going to finish nr1 too. than decide which one im going to submit.

Thanks everyone for your input on this!
Anybody got some ideas to improve this; at the current stage?

[nesokaiyoh]

Tough decision but they're all fantastic! This is looking amazing so far too, love the concept.

[tj-works]

This is a very grim visual, I love it.

It's hard what to say or improve as you had a clear vision in mind. The only thing I can think of is her pose being a little too symmetrical. Maybe try adjusting the position of her limbs a little to see if it improves? For example, maybe bend the legs a little but have one bent more than the other, since she's floating. Or maybe bend her fingers a little different from each other so it's not the same pose on each side.

[nesokaiyoh]

Now that tj mentioned it, I didn't even know she was floating so I'd say that definitely should show more!

[aypersc]

hard decision, the colors are incredible, maybe if you add something bright, something that adds another light source to focus the view at that point

[stefankoidl]

Small update; i changed the hands a bit and the legs like tj mentioned.
i also pushed the floor a bit more down, maybe its clearer now that she floats.
Im still unsure about the design, will focus on that later.
Will also add a bit of light at the top later.

[nesokaiyoh]

This is already looking clearer, and yes it does read better that she floats now! Your values are looking really wonderful, it's a really beautiful piece in both concept and application. One of my faves

[caffeinatedbrushes]

Damn you could almost call it finished like that! The composition and the clothing design are top-notch.

[stefankoidl]

I would nearly call this done, is there anything you would point out that just "doesnt" work?

[tj-works]

This piece looks gorgeous. I'd say leave it as it is. Fantastic attention to detail.

[dreamsequenz]

The mood is so creepy love it

[pylua]

How come I didn't find this topic sooner !
This piece looks amazing. Congrats for this one !

[yeinART]

Great work! Love the lighting, the really adds to the creepiness to the piece!

[cedricgo]

I haven't seen this topic in quite a while, but the end result is really awesome! I love it! The atmosphere and creepyness are just amazing.

Great work!

[rgdraw]

How did I missed this?!! It's incredible!! Amazing work!

[daimonfist]

WTF!!!...What a beautiful creation.

[clarief]

This looks ammmaazziinnggg! Great job!